For Posterity
~Augustus Snodgrass
I used to dive off cliffs;
Head first,
arms wide,
Plummeting down
towards rocks
and river.
My head hitting first
and then the water holds me
as I go down
then up,
fast
because my breath is gone.
But one time,
I tripped.
My toe caught.
The nail ripped;
red ran down my foot,
which was flying
as I fell.
The river out of reach.
last minute
reflex,
I kicked forward.
I hit the water.
I stopped jumping.
But you said I’d have no stories to tell my kids.
You said it was for posterity.
The river is beautiful
but I don’t trust the cliffs
I don’t dive
I don’t throw myself off anymore
I wait
cautious,
looking down
calculating.
And then,
I jump:
feet, torso, head.
I like the change in posture as a reflection of the change in mindset. Also the strange intrusion of posterity in a poem on cliff-jumping emotions...probably helps apply the poem on a larger level. Is this poem the first in the water collection, or does it go with that other one about jumping?
ReplyDeleteI like the last part especially, and i like how it switches from head-first to feet-first. Good idea having a collection of a certain theme of poems - maybe I'll try that.
ReplyDeleteTT, I was trying to apply it on a larger level but I was having trouble doing it without being cheesy or cliche. I have some more work to do on it for sure. SP, I love doing several different poems around a theme and from different pov's.
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